There are a couple of changes I made to the double page spread but nothing major. I moved the caption from the bottom left corner of the main image to the top above the model's head because the stripes on the jacket made the caption difficult to see in it's original position; I think it stands out much better now. There was also a spelling mistake in the summary above the article so once that was pointed out to me, I changed it and re-read the article through to ensure there was no other mistakes, which there wasn't.
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